My last vacation
comentada em 02/08/2020 15:15

Change - my wife and me, it's more polite.

Congratulations for you effort.
The text is clear.

I would remove the word there after some beaches, you already mentioned the place in the text. Also, the word various I would change to many or a lot, it sounds better. beatiful has only one L. good job. cheers

@Kyuzo kudos!

"My wife and I went to SC"
The speaker comes last.
I is subject pronoun (Im doing the action)
Me is a object pronoun (the action is done to me)


"For the first time we just relaxed, sometimes we swam, other times we just sat on the sand

We enjoyed the place and especially found
Talvez essa mudança tb... especially found ao invés de found especially

@Kyuzo what is the best meal you had there?
What was so special about it?

We went to a thai restaurant. I don't remenber the names of the meals, but it had flavours we didn't taste before and we loved it.

thai restaurant:




Origem do Selo

it worths click on the origin of the meme and laugh aa lot

I'm dumb, because they didn't pay me. They charged me. Can you believe that? Outrageous

I laughed a lot with seal origin "Manequim de restautante"

beautiful and not beautifull

@Kyuzo

It must have been a wonderful getaway! It is great to change holiday routines, and just stay put at the seaside, enjoying the view and local dishes.

Your text is quite well written, there are only a couple of small adjustments to polish it. My suggestions bellow.

“This will be cheesy, but is a good excuse to practice writing.

My last vacation was in January when my wife and I went to Imbituba-SC for our wedding anniversary. We visited some beaches there, but most of the time we stayed at Praia do Rosa.

Usually when we go to the beach we like to go to a lot of places and do various activities. For the first time we just relaxed, sometimes we swam and other times just sat on the beach chairs and ordered food from nearby restaurants. It was different from what we normally do, but also fun.

We enjoyed the place and found Praia do Rosa especially beautiful.”

It is a lovely idea to write about holidays, as you can practice the language and revisit good memories at one go. Congratulations!

- " there were flavours we had not tasted before"

This was really good. I got great feedback. Thanks everybody!